Monday, September 19, 2005

The Power Screecher: Fireblock's Revenge

Everyone thought the Screecher was dead, but they didn’t see the Screecher moving his electric new body. This Screecher has spiky hands that can turn into fire. He can blow fire out of his legs, which makes him fly. He has wings and every time he screeches his beak shoots electric spells, which can kill anyone who goes near it.

One day a person from the town Village saw the Screecher. He knew what it was and he ran for his life because he knew the Screecher was back! The Screecher began destroying everything. He destroyed a house with his fire and then the hero, Firehead, stepped out of the house. The bear, Bearteeth - the warrior’s pet, tried to attack the Screecher, but he missed and caught on flames.

He ran around looking for water and put his bum in and then fell into the water. The bad guy, Fireblock, captured the bear and turned him into an electric monster, but his master, Firehead turned him back into a super-bear. Firehead cast a spell, “the firedrainer,” which makes an electric flying fish called Firebolt , which started to attack. Firehead was inside the electric fish. The fish got struck but the Screecher also lost his fire power. The screecher didn’t notice and was struck dead.

- Finis

1 comment:

Nick said...

Evan - good job on the Screecher. Hey, been too long since you wrote. Keep going. There's other kids that like to read and write out here.

I haven't posted my original writing at www.kidreviewer.com, except for my reviews. I have writtn a bunch, but having fun talking about movies, books and games lately.

nick